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I've discovered that I have very little patience for stories that rely on a surface characterization to carry the plot along. That is, characters who have some humorous interaction with each other due to their conflicting personalities, or whose obnoxious but loveable personalities keep the plot interesting. The characters are often referred to as "comic reliefs," but I usually find that writers who include them stop at the caricature of what a "comic relief" is supposed to be: funny, but endlessly loveable.

It isn't an issue I have with chosen personalities, since all personalities can be written well by an effective writer. The issue is the author relies on the personality as a mere plot element and never cares to take it further, never bothering to understand the underlaying workings of said character. The same goes for relationships between characters. Relationships are usually set up as plot elements with the idea of tension in mind: either sexual or personal. I'd use Love Hina as a good example of this, wherein the plot is dragged on so that two characters who are hilariously and awkwardly thrust into sexually tense situations can finally admit their love for each other. Again, it isn't the relationship or even the conflicting personalities, the humor, or the awkward sexual tension I'm necessarily against. It's the reliance on these elements, and these elements alone, to carry the story that bothers me.

Writers who rely too heavily on surface humor without bothering to go deeper into the human condition, or at least their characters' inner workings, offer little in value to me.

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[info]dailyb wrote:
Aug. 5th, 2008 11:46 pm (UTC)
charactertures
That is inarguably true- it really bothers me when a plot is peopled by plot elements rather than, you know, people. It's true I suppose that some people in real life can seem to fit into caricatures most of the time, even willingly. We all write ourselves into the roles that our society presents us at possibilities. No one succeeds at this all the time however, and in fact situations of conflict are exactly the times when caricatures tend to break down. A character-driven story should reflect this.
[info]daysaregrass wrote:
Aug. 5th, 2008 11:47 pm (UTC)
Re: charactertures
Well said, and a perfect examination of my point. :D
[info]daysaregrass wrote:
Aug. 14th, 2008 05:23 am (UTC)
I'm moving this comment over to the appropriate post, so I'll comment on it here:

synaptica57 says: Ah, but what about those wacky or tragic characters that remind you of your sister or a favorite uncle? Their antics often reveal their inner demons, without excess character analysis by the writer or complicated plots. They tap into your experiences with loved ones and provide a comfort zone that allows further introspection. "Lucy" acts silly to get Desi to notice her. "Jane Eyre" feels ugly so she falls in love with a blind man.

The thing is, your sister or your uncle are really complex people. A writer trying to get a quick snapshot of their personality or dynamics does so with the intent of trying to get you to fill in the rest of the character yourself, just as you suggest. No, an author doesn't need to do all the explaining him/herself (good writers don't). But leaving so much lacking that all you have is a barebones archetype is the problem I'm addressing. At times, authors wish to leave a character open ended so that you, the reader, can insert yourself and identify with the MC better. This is a technique to make your reader feel more integrated in the story, as well as one that reduces the risk of your MC being so unlikable or unrelatable that the reader fails to connect with the story at all. I'd argue that it's better to take the chance of this in order to have a well developed character, but more importantly, that you give us, the readers, more than a list of generic, archetypal qualities to go off of. After all, your sister might be fun, and your uncle might be kooky, but that doesn't mean they aren't made up of complex characteristics. It also doesn't mean you have to like them. That, and the very fact that their antics reveal any inner demons or personality shows that the author isn't suffering from what I'm addressing.
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